seriously

[xp_magik]

the cool valkyrie chick didnt even come BACK with us?/ ugh hell dimensions are the worst and if anyone ever needs me for a mysterious journey to hell again pls rethink yr plan bc i am not going. i even reset my stupid password to say so so I MEAN IT now i cant find the explanation mark key but i am serious nobody better ask me ever again

also rahne a monster thing ripped your jacket that i borrowed by accident and there's some stuff on it so probably u wont want it back. send that canadian guy the bill

Comments

[xp_cloak]

They hardly ever ask us to leave this dimension. Probably won't happen again for YEARS.

[xp_magik]

i don't care what year it happens the answer is NO since they can just send you to EAT EVERYTHING ANyway

[xp_fantastic]

It appears that your general English skills have been woefully neglected.

This was very difficult to read.

There are several issues with your syntax, sentence structure and punctuation (or lack thereof), which leads me to believe you are not receiving an adequate education. In addition, while stream of consciousness is an appropriate literary style, I'm not sure it translates to a 'blog' post, although I supposed the argument could be made for such.

If you would like to discuss this further, please let me know.

R.

[xp_wolfsbane]

Oh. Oh...no.

[xp_fantastic]

I believe I am correct, and not wrong. I'm not entirely sure what your negative response is in regards to.

[xp_magik]

i got too bored after the words "general english skills" to finish reading this pls use less words i am v busy

[xp_fantastic]

I do tend to get verbose. I apologize for the lack of clarity on my initial post. In brief: You have poor writing abilities.

[xp_xavin]

Bro.

This is not the time to get all anal retention genius on illyana.

Back off.

She just went to a literal hell dimension and it's not like she was good at writing before that.

[xp_fantastic]

You are the second person to comment in this manner.

I will have to reflect further.

[xp_wildchild]

Okay, yo I know you are hardcore smart, but Reed, yo, *this is not how you encourage a kid whose education is questionable. She's perfectly understandable, give the kid a break.

[xp_synch]

No criticizing other people's writing if you don't use the Oxford comma.

[xp_cypher]

I like where your head's at, man.

[xp_wolfsbane]

Considering all the clothes I've destroyed while figuring out my powers, I think one more should be okay.

Though it would be nice to start sending other people my clothing bills...

[xp_magik]

i dont know what a canadian is but whatever, he was the supervising adult so he can buy you a new jacket and also i dont understand why we couldnt trade him for the lady with the sword

Can't get rid of me

[xp_dominion]

I have tenure.

[xp_xavin]

Oh my god are you okay?

(Why do I never get to do anything cool?)

[xp_magik]

i mean i got scratched and there was rahne's jacket but mostly i am just MAD

hell dimensions arent cool, they are the literal actual worst and i dont know why i keep having to go to them but tbh i am OVER IT, just imagine if stupid nature had monsters and lava and there you are.

[xp_dagger]

How you doing besides going to a Hell Dimension?

[xp_magik]

mad and hungry

[xp_scarlet_witch]

would you like me to stop by tonight or tomorrow? Or you can escape to my suite for a while if you'd like. You'll just need to play Tetris with the stacks of books, of course,

[xp_magik]

yes i will find u bc i need u to make sure nobody ever asks me for help again. is tetris the game miles is always yelling at with the aliens

[xp_blink]

you're not having a good day

[xp_magik]

obviously although everyone keeps feeding me so it could be worse

[xp_velocidad]

...huh.

[xp_bruiser]

Woah, I totally missed a lot.